Feedback

Feedback on Digipak, Magazine and Music Video

Today we received written feedback from our classmates on our entire coursework project, and also verbal feedback from our teachers which I have written down to hopefully improve my grade. Here is the feedback:

Digipak

-Verbal

-"Sorry" in the top left photo needs to be clearer and framed better.

-Written

-Very indie and follows conventions well

-Possibly too dark, lighten two of the photos with exposure

-Genre appropriate

-Follows conventions

-Love the back panel

-Nice font

-Pills panels are stronger than ones of the person.

Through this feedback I can see that there are a few changes I should make to my digipak. I should definitely make "Sorry" clearer and will do so by retaking the photo.  I also could possibly lighten two of the photos, however I feel this may take away from the dark feel to my digipak, something I may have to consider.

Magazine

-Verbal

- Stars need to be smaller

- iTunes and other logos need to be smaller and at the bottom

- Remove "Buy on iTunes"

- Extra review needed

-Written

-Like the gold stars

-Advert relates well to digipak

-Yellow stars don't fit

-Clear theme

-Looks really good

Through the feedback on my magazine I can see there are lots of changes to make. I should definately add a few more reviews, and remove the "Buy on iTunes" part. I should also make the stars smaller and move the logos to the bottom. Hopefully these changes will make my magazine more effective.

Music Video

-Verbal

-None

-Written

-Understandable narrative

- Some lip syncing under annunciation

-Logo very good

-Takes 10 minutes to walk a very short distance

- Like how start and end are linked

-Good narrative

Through this feedback I feel that there is very little to change for my music video. I cannot do much about the lip syncing as it is extremely difficult to pull off and I have tried my best, and I feel that the video is still effective despite this.