First Draft

First Draft

Here is the first draft of our music video. We have asked for feedback on the video and have got some from our teacher. We are going to make these changes for our final video

- The initial shot does not convey the two paths concept clearly- possibly try some different effects?

- Not sure about lip syncing in the reverse shots- possibly remove

- Editing pace is appropriate

- Good variety of shots

I agree with this feedback and will therefore be making these changes for our final video. Hopefully our final draft will come out better and improve our mark.