Feedback on Phoenix Sargant
Today we received feedback on the work we had done on our mainstream artist, here are the responses from members of our class + target audience
Positives
- Logo is impressive and successful
- Shows good artist image
- Good costume/hair
- Appropriate release story for genre and artist
- Appropriate props and amazing music video concept
- Highlighting key words is effective
- Lyrics are a good addition
- Good effort and lots of detail- very consistent throughout
- Good balance between text and imagery
- Good choice of cover song
- Good use of hair to emphasise his identity
Improvements
- Compare to other similar artists and analyse their target audiences
- Take own photos
- Needs a turtle neck sweater
- More advertising
- More detail on target audience
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